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Sneak Peek - Eden

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I honestly felt relief when Evan stepped off of my porch to leave me and venture off into the wilderness once again. I was mad at this poor excuse for a human being. In fact, I was really hoping he would get lost again, and this time, Nature would actually kill him.

I didn't like Evan at all. He is weak; he doesn't know how to fight for himself at all; and worst of all, he is a total coward. If he came across a spider in my home, he would get me to kill it. Who knows how he would fare alone against larger animals in the wilderness closer to the South.

But deep within me. . .something told me to go with him.

It had been three months since Evan first met me out here in the frozen wastelands of Northern Alaska, and the thought of him leaving me behind to be alone again in this white, lifeless landscape was hard to imagine. He was the only human contact I've ever had in over a year, and I became attached to him.

"Evan!" I cried, before he got out of range of my voice. "Wait!"

Evan stopped and turned around, and stood out in the snow, his face calm.

"I want to come with you," I called.

I waited for a response from him, but he just stood there, watching me.

A smile slowly formed across his face, and he began walking back to my porch.

"Pack your things, Eden," he said.
Just a little sneak peek of what can be expected for those who became fans of my story Eden :meow:

You can almost feel the adventure about to take off. . .

And for those who don't know Eden. . .

Eden comes off as cold-hearted, because she watched her creator, Allan Sigmond, get killed right before her. After losing him, she trained herself not to become attached to anything. Evan changed that, because after a year in isolation, Evan made Eden realize just how lonely she was.
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I can feel there will be ROMANCE :iconwuvplz: